Hmm...note to self. Not EVERYONE dies. Interesting...
Owen Gieni
· 1 year ago
I'm not really happy with this page, I think the last two panels work, but those first two I could have done a better job on. It's a learning process though, getting better bit by bit. I'm thinking it'll be really tight by the end of the story. That's the hope.
Chris Crosby
· 1 year ago
I love the art on this page.
Gothicbob
· 1 year ago
And we have our hero!
Leffy
· 1 year ago
theres a.... transparent fuzziness over the first few panels. i like it. works very well with the "waking up after the big nap" setting. i know waking up after surgery you have that sort of misty edged appearance of everything for a bit, before the evil hospital lights put everything into super clarity. i'm trying to say i love your art and how little things that usually go unnoticed that you grab and run with are what keep bringing me back. that and the fact that i just plain love the story as its coming along.
blueocean9
· 1 year ago
this is pretty good so far!
but what happened to last blood? are you giving up on it or something?
Ella N.
· 1 year ago
Your art is AWESOME. I hope you update soon on both this one (I wanna know what happens next -- I'm still a bit confuzed) and on Last Blood (that one hasn't been updated in eons!)
you suck, im a troll
· 1 year ago
Gothicbob, WE DO NOT NEED A GODDAMN HERO!! WHAT ABOUT ANTI-HERO OR SOME SHIT? Seriously, being a victim DOES NOT make you a hero. It makes you a victim. Watch Mission Hill. Dumbass.
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but what happened to last blood? are you giving up on it or something?
Seriously, being a victim DOES NOT make you a hero. It makes you a victim. Watch Mission Hill. Dumbass.
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